“Bukan Milik Ku”-My first malay Song Composition
Here’s a song inspired by personal experience. I was out and about in the city last Monday. I came home late and started writing the lyrics and the basic melody. Completed it finally today. If you listen closely, there’s still some timing issues, pitch etc… well I still need to improve on those department. Funny how you only realize the mistakes after everything has been completed.
Feel free to download. I’m feeling generous today.
For those lonely people out there, hope you find your soul mate.
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waaa
mamat jiwang nie…
ok la …nice song…like the melody
not sure bout the laptop though…uhuhuhuhu
hehehe(aku ka dlm ur song)kikiki…
best giler..tp yg paling x tahan ader laptop lah plak..anyway i give u 9/10…
p/s: biler lak ko nak wat lagu pasal aku kay..aku pon nk glamour gaks..he hee
Huih…
Jiwang karat maut punye beb…
But nice song. Bunyi macam “keciwa” jer mamat tu… Apa? Itu sumuni mau pulang Sabah ka?
save the world(no smoking)- Gadis misteri kot?
sha yg jeliter- Laptop tu menunjukkan teknologi alaf baru yang mana kita kenalah menerima idea anjakan paradigma yang bakal membawa perubahan kepada negara kita dan sememangnya gambar potret sekarang tidak semestinya berada dalam bingkai seperti yang diterima umum…
DrIzad- Ntah lah mamat tu. Dia kena menerima kenyataan. Ya mungkin akan pulang kembali ke pangkal jalan…
Hello Kay,
Heard the song.
Not bad.
Very passionate. Great voice.
Very emotion driven *wink wink*
Regina Cassandra- Thanks. Emotion driven it is. *wink-wink*
Nice tune bro… I think that this one tops your other stuff so far…
I think that this song would sound better in English though.. you must give it some super Chorus effect to make it blend with a harder twang for lead… and drumming need to be more fancy… I can help you here.. Call me to do the druming track recording, if you plan to re-record…
wau!..what a wonderful song’s..full of meaning ya..hehehe..i can feel it bro…hehehe..mau nangis plak dengar ur song ni..hehehe..but i think u’ll be the best composer and singer lau u p join music malaysian..ala-ala indon gitu kan..hehehe…God bless..surely lagu ni akan top!!!best giler bro…
Patricks- Hey bro! Thanks for the positive comments. I could still do the drum tracks but it will sound much better with acoustics drums…I wish I have access to a studio to do that.
Caroll Kunak- Wah sampai berair mata mu?? Lagu ni memang penuh bermakna.
Me best composer?? ha ha.. for category “Bedroom Singer” kot..
aiksss…mcm di radio larrr!
i like the melody even if it still not perfect yet.
but i must say…im impressed!
*clap*clap*
CCarol- *kembang hidung* Glad you liked it. Thank you.
erm…sa rasa mcm lain ja bunyi drum tu…atau d pc sa yg buffer ni…
btw…nice song..buli digilap lagi..suda polish lepas tu kasi bakar pakai lilin lagi..baru kilat…
Lai- Saya pakai itu Boss DrRythm bah tu, drum machine tapi tidak pandai program so sia main manual lah… pakai jari lah.
Thanks for your comment. Ya. Banyak lagi mau kasi licin bah. Maklumlah.. bedroom singer saja bah sia ni.. he he
owh man… that’s really catchy…
Hey…
Excellent music!!
Too bad your voice were too soft, you should have sing louder, would be perfect than!
Coz at first I thought it was only music…
Hehehehe…
Arms, Thanks buddy.
PennyW- Was it? Sounds loud on my monitor speakers.
Nice song kay
Did you sing this song on your own? If yes, nice voice 
Keep it up!
Emelda- All music arrangements, vocals, guitar, bass drums are by me, Kay and myself. Yes I did it on my own. Thanks.
I’ll give you 10/10 for your effort on this song.
Liked it a lot, perhaps we can compose some together.
best regards,
Onnin Osthen Jaunic
(your long lost friend)
Onen- Thanks buddy. yeah. Come over KL or write something, got internet mah! (long lost buddy)
Lagu jiwang. Tu la engkau sapa suru tak ngurat habis tu awek. Na dia dah ikut jantan lain ..Ha…saya suka lagu ni.
Remsis- Ha ha! Memang sudah terlambat bah apa bulih buat… buat lagu jiwang la bikin ubat hati sendiri. You like it? Nice to know that. Thanks!
hai kay..
congratulation.!! the end of this song is the beginning to produce & publish another song for the world.
sesuai lagu ni pasang dekat ofis..!!
kerani2 superclerk pun suka lagu ni..
Superzam- Hey thanks brother. They like it huh?
Still have some material tapi belum bikin habis…
wow..very good rendition..keep up..sound quality can be improved..heard that line-6 lot more better especially when you buy with the specific mic meant for recording studio.. my friend has the line-6 with that mic..his sound quite good and impressive..
your voice..too soft..it suits the song melody..and backup vocal..was OK..
looking forward to your next songs..
Wel- Thanks for the comment. Yeah. Still a long way before I can improve my recordings…
I know about the line-6 models. I’ve check it out at CK Music, my fav hang-out… he he. My current M-audio, audio interface is still working fine.
Interesting blog you have there. Seems like you are in KL too.
tu wording Laptop tu yang mahal kay hohoho
BennyLiew- Don’t play-play. Technology bah..he he
nice voice, keep it up….
ndy- Thanks buddy! Amacam urang-urang di Kunak?
hi…ive came across tis blog n song while surfin d net…
i like ur blog n tis song…nice…
mcm hmpr sma jak kisah idup kta ni…huhu~
Aku- Thanks. Yeah. When stuff comes from real experience, jadi kreatif lah kita walau macam mana pun sakitnya pengalaman tu. Adui…!
Nice song bro…neway, ko pernah ka dgr lagu2 GMB or Sidney Mohaya(Indonesian Religous Band)?..u got their sense of music…
siok ni lagu ko ni tompinai.Bulih tahan
MrsGraig- Thanks for the compliments. And no, never heard of em…. will check them out soon!
Butod- Thanks buddy! Jiwang karat bah… he he
Lirik simple tp pukulan mendalam..muzik hebat so powerfull..hebat oh awk ni bro,solute you pren..album ni belum release ka bro? X kisah sangat ada noise skit2 sbb demo kan…hahahaha
Aki- No plans yet. Still kumpul more bahan. Kalau keluar pun bukan album lah maybe more like demo and stuff.
Yeah, still learning how to reduce the hiss and all but so far still boleh diterima oleh telinga orang. He he.. thanks again.
LifeDemo..sorry..am in Penang..hehe..music doesnt really care about product..its the art that matters..hehe….thanks for the blog..cheers!
nice one…:) i love the lyric.. coz it mention ‘lesung pipit’.haha. i have that n i can feel tis song..Good luck bro!
Hazel- Terima kasih! Nice to know you ‘feel’ this song as well. Ada lesung pipit juga kau? Ui mahal tu he he! Thanks for dropping by.
yah really feel it..hehe. ada baa..ya mahal teda jual d kadai..haha. btw, nice website
Hi bro…lama aku inda mengomen di blog mu…very nice song…lirik yg unik dan some personal feeling in the song…I love listening to the guitar sound…when I recorded my song (record stail lama ja..ni mixing here and there), I use guitar only…I can see that there is a few ‘expert’ in here..anyway, keep composing your song…I like to hear you sing man…silopo..
i like your song………….but jiwang sikit arh……………
leh thn gak lgew ……..,bg aq lgew niew x best sngt arh …..[jht kan aq nie]wasalam……………………………………………………………………………………..tkr lorh lguew………………………….hu….hu.hu…..hhuuu…………..
hallow…………..i owg bru kat cni………………..kalo nk knl add arh………………..i always wait for you all………………..anyway i like this song………………………..hu……..hu………hu
Hazel- Thanks!
Nimrodjo- Just some of my experiments bah this. Still trying to do a proper recording. Thanks for the ‘puji-pujian’ biasa jak tu..
Nurul Afiqah- Memang lagu jiwang pun, pasal mamat sedih tak dapat awek…
Ala-ala indon songs, sad but cool. Yup, can relate to it. Mayb u shud do a compilation on all of ur songs. I’m owez supportin d local acts, esp if know dat person
LadyCruz- Yeah it was supposed to be a sad ‘jiwang’ song he he. Yeah maybe I should huh? See la if I have more materials this year.
Nice song bro. Lyric pun best….kena touchup susunan muziknya..mesti lagi mantop..